THE FUTURE CAR - APSARA

 Car who can do all the things that can a human does............ A car of all the car lovers......... Having green fuel in it with the same power.......... technology never seen before.........Yes, it's not a movement it's a revolution......... Introducing APSARA11.........But before the intro, let's have look on a story of its first owner...?

There was a family used to live in Chicago. There were 3 member in family.  Kumar sangakara(son), jaydev( Father) , Gajgamini (mother)...
Actually they all 3 were miragtes. They used to live in indian subcontinent. But due to a reason they were compelled to leave where they grown. They(jaydev and gajgamini) didn't get any type of financial help from their relative. In a nutshell there condition was not good. They were as much poor as much nobody could be.
Then they decided to migrate from indian subcontinent. Jaydev's friend arranges a illegal shipyard for jaydev and his wife gajgamini. Somehow they managed to reach at the Chicago. The main reason for selecting this destination was employment. Jaydev's freind assured him about a decent job(as jaydev was a automobile engineer without having a piece of degree)
But the destiny was not with them. His friend
Were not able to manage a job for them as he assured.
Her wife's reaction was same as aa gaya swaad.. what's the plan now.
Jaydev assured and tried to believe in himself...
They were educated, but still were living at footpaths..... They were not able to manage their basic needs as well. They used to eat after weeks...,
Their situation can not be written. If you want practical just give me your bank account number with a pin.. you will be able to feel same as they were... Offer is limited for 1 day only.

After that they have a baby_cum_aafat(in their regional language) his name was kumar sangakara. His nick name was kumar....
Kumar was not healthy as they were not able to manage any thing..... Kumar was sick, was ill but their parents were in chill.
One day a scary night where they lost kumar.
On the 2nd day jaydev lost his wife. Then jagdev was very melancholy...... On the same night he lies on bed to take sleep.....He saw dream that he had purchased a future luxury car named Apsara.......He was the first owner of it.....Then he never awake from that day...He is still in his dream.......

The end.



Comments

  1. This outline creates some excitement to get more knowledge about APSARA. Add an image to give it fascinating look.

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  2. Your blog has exposition, inciting, rising action, climax and falling action all things are present ,but I did not find resolution here only and I like this story of apsara's owner and your images are explaining your story that thing amazed me a lot, but here I found one spelling error as well "Miragtes-Migrates**" I think you did it in hurry and I found punctuation error here only. All over your blog is interesting.

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  3. Story is mesmerizing to read and includes attractive images. All the components are mentioned. Ending of the product could be more elaborative or you could give a message to readers, if are about to make its second part as story looks incomplete. Need to work on comma after transitional words.( Then, somewhat)

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