GREMLIN HOUSE PET written by a Animal rights supporter.

Once upon a time, There was a strange character Gremlin which was a pet of a Chinese family..
The family has 5 member. Parents and their children( 2 beautiful Girls named Lina & Pisa and a not handsome boy named Antonio)..

They were living their life as usual as used to be. But one day they found something, something suspicious. That was a creature called Gremlin.

Antonio took that small creature and brought it to his home. There Lina & Pisa got surprised only as their presents play chess whole, each and every day😄 even they play chess while eating.

After the arrival of Gremlin, Pisa welcomed Little creature with paan parag because Pisa was habitual for it. After this Coronation little Gremlin was happy but not happiest cause may be he would know that what's going to be happened with him in following days.

Lina is very tiny, ulgy, and a fashion girl. She has a good interest in beauty parlour. So once upon a time she was very curious that how a gremlin will look like after a mackup...
And this was not good idea as gremlin could have allergy or any other skin problem or social problems like gremlin will start looking like female gremlin.. This was not good really...Except this there are many ways by which gremlin faces problems they have their own life who we are to purchase them and put them in a little House. 

Once Antonio, a simple tall, slender boy with having balancing thoughts and good communication with Animals,  Was sitting just beside the gremlin. Everything was going good until a  cat come. Cat tried to hurt the little creature gremlin. Suddenly Antonio took a long , thick stick by that he tried to beat the cat but by diffrent camera angle someone took a picture of this incident. And it was looking as the Antonio tried to hit the little creature. This picture gets published with a extensive article that  HOW ANIMALS ARE AT HOME.


Actually these all incident was happening in  my dream (while sleeping) then I woke and let you all read this till the time I'm making team on dream 11😁.

Comments

  1. Your story was nice Aman. It has suspense as well and I really want to read the next part. I can see a hope of story writer inside you. If I talk about errors, I just found some punctuation marks mistakes only, might be it occurred due to lack of time. Keep focusing and good luck for future.

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  2. Outline is easy to understand the story and I am able to make connection. Take care of capitalisation error, especially when you write name. As I know you are goot at grammar, don't be in rush to write.

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    1. Thanks ma'am.. I will focus more on capitalisation.

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